THANK YOU ALL!  MY SHORT TWITTER TIME NOW IS DONE!

Finally, after some daunting technical difficulties, my short time Twitter is over.


I faced some stinging criticism from members of this forum on the gaps in the film.  I took this advice to heart and no one can, in my opinion, can legitimately claim that the first part is boring.  Quite the contrary!

I have listed Bill Hunt, Colin Brougham, Jim Simon, Shooternz, robodog2 and joebloepremiere for a thank you with all my heart in the credits.

Thank you all; you did a much better movie!

I also wanted to have the film into two parts; the first part on the overload of information and experience exponential acceleration and the second on human who answers whether the women, movie, planting trees, a walk in the woods or anything to slow down time.

While I got this part and intent, I wonder if perhaps you have filled the screen, near the end of the opening, with the info. While I liked the look of the clean 'framing', which could be lost on others. I found with some viewers, we should rather "hit over the head," just a little more, WE would like to. Subtle is often lost on the masses, even if I like it.

I could see the fill area with flashes of "titles," they said, if you want, and then when the screen is full, everything did a very slow fade to black. I don't want to adultrate your vision and like the opening, but was just thinking, trying to put myself in the seats of the "public". Doing so, at a frantic pace, in total counterpoint to the soundtrack could be a useful way faster and faster and more crowded, until the BOOM - a beautiful and quiet forest - tension and counterpoint builds and then... it ends with the 'message '.

Just thinking here.

Good luck

Hunt

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